My autobiography
My father is a painstaking motocycle fixer. Mom is a houseworker and assist manager in our motorcycle shop. Then, my sister graduated from National Chung Hsing University two years ago.
When I graduated from junior high school, I dreamed of five years prefessional school life . Then I studied management system information of China University of Technology in Taipei. My academic advisor encourageed me to join 會計事務丙級檢定 and strengthen my English ability. Fortunately, I passed through 會計事務丙級、中文輸入 and 電腦丙級學科 qualifications in my five years prefessional school duration. I don't want to continute study after graduation. Soonly , I found my first job as a factory assistant in MSI( 微星科技股份有限公司. My second job was in a lawyer comany (徐士斌律師事務所)as an assistant. My third job was a tutor in the Best English school(卓越英文補習班).
The idea of going to college never crossed my mind when I was in five years specialized school. Thought five years work experience. I knew if I was ever going to make a change in my life,it had better be while I was still young enough to do it. Luckily, my family was supportive of my decision to return to school. We had a family conference and discussed the good and bad points of my going back to school, and they all encouraged me to go for it. Fortunately, I got s Southern Taiwan university of Technology, a prestious and highly estimated school, according to the evaluation result in September this year. I realize it won't be as easy as I imagined. I never majored in applied English when I was in the five-years prefessional school. I think I need to spend much time to read up in the field of linguistics.
In the futrue, I'm going to give college my best shot, and I am hopeful it will make a difference in my life.
posted by 莊佳燕 @ 2:10 AM
2 Comments:
Well done! Good wriitng. You are quite good at using English to express your ideas and talk about your experiences. Some comments:
1. Mom is a housework and assist manage in our motorcycle shop.
-->an assistant manager
2.Then, my sister graduated National Chung Hsing University two years ago.
-->from National...
3. I dream of five years prefessional school life .
-->dreamed of...
4. Then I speed well test to study management system information of China University of Technology--Department of management information systems in Taipei.
-->spend well test ? What do you mean here? Can you try to rephrase it?
-->ok, I see, it is really China, not Chi-nan!
5. My academic advisor encourageed me to join 會計事務丙級檢定 and strengthen English ability.
-->strengthen my English ability.
6.my teacher's wings to -->?
7.I don't want to study continute when I graduate in academy.
-->don't want to continue study after graduation.
8. Soonly , I find my first job in MSI( 微星科技股份有限公司)-factory assistant that I done one year.
-->I found my first job as a factory assistant in ...
9.Second job in law office（徐士斌律師事務所)-lawer assistant that I done two years.
-->My second job was in a lawyer comany as an assistant.
10. Third job in the Best English school(卓越英文補習班)-tutor that I don one and half years.
-->My third job was as a tutor in ...
11.When I gradeuated,I offed hand to raise a stake.
-->?
12. Thought the baptism of five years work experience.
-->? Can you make it clear?
13.On fortunately, I get into Southern Taiwan university of Technology that is a first estimate scool on September this year.
-->Fortunately, I got ..., a prestious and highly estimated school, according to the evaluation result in September this year.
14. Now that I've started classes for three weeks,I realize it won't be as easy as I agined.
-->imagined
15. Maybe I never major this application English department when I am in the five years prefessional school.
-->I never majored in applied English when I was in the five-year professional school.
Well done! Good wriitng. You are quite good at using English to express your ideas and talk about your experiences. Some comments:
1. Mom is a housework and assist manage in our motorcycle shop.
-->an assistant manager
2.Then, my sister graduated National Chung Hsing University two years ago.
-->from National...
3. I dream of five years prefessional school life .
-->dreamed of...
4. Then I speed well test to study management system information of China University of Technology--Department of management information systems in Taipei.
-->spend well test ? What do you mean here? Can you try to rephrase it?
-->ok, I see, it is really China, not Chi-nan!
5. My academic advisor encourageed me to join 會計事務丙級檢定 and strengthen English ability.
-->strengthen my English ability.
6.my teacher's wings to -->?
7.I don't want to study continute when I graduate in academy.
-->don't want to continue study after graduation.
8. Soonly , I find my first job in MSI( 微星科技股份有限公司)-factory assistant that I done one year.
-->I found my first job as a factory assistant in ...
9.Second job in law office（徐士斌律師事務所)-lawer assistant that I done two years.
-->My second job was in a lawyer comany as an assistant.
10. Third job in the Best English school(卓越英文補習班)-tutor that I don one and half years.
-->My third job was as a tutor in ...
11.When I gradeuated,I offed hand to raise a stake.
-->?
12. Thought the baptism of five years work experience.
-->? Can you make it clear?
13.On fortunately, I get into Southern Taiwan university of Technology that is a first estimate scool on September this year.
-->Fortunately, I got ..., a prestious and highly estimated school, according to the evaluation result in September this year.
14. Now that I've started classes for three weeks,I realize it won't be as easy as I agined.
-->imagined
15. Maybe I never major this application English department when I am in the five years prefessional school.
-->I never majored in applied English when I was in the five-year professional school.
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