My favorite car is Ford focus 2.0
I know a lot of famous and old trademark cars.,for example, Ford、Toyota、Nissan、Suzuki、HONDA. Among these, Ford focus 2.0 is definitely my favorite. In regard to point , it has good function, move seat or position that can let my family and me sit safety.
The focus of the car is low and the chasis is very heavy so it feels steady when driving this car on the mountain roads.
Young people love this car for its fashional exterior design and its bodywork is very light . The car reflects my personality: sweet inside and tough outside.
It is my dream to have a car like this. I have two main reasons for wanting this car. First, I love its fahsional look and I like the feeling of playing music loud and turning down the window to enjoy the air blowing in while driving it. Second, it will be a ideal vehicle for me to take my family everywhere in Taiwan.
posted by 莊佳燕 @ 4:23 AM
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I know a lot of famous and old trademark cars. for example: ford、Toyota、Nissan、suzuki、HONDA.
-->...,for example, Ford, ...
In regard to point , it has good function, move seat or position that can let my family and me sit safety.
-->it's function, movable seats and interior design make my family and me feel safe when sitting in it.
-->Is this your topic sentence?
The focus body and chasis is very heavy when drive it go mountain climbing is very easy return and steady.
-->The focus of the car is low and the chasis is very heavy so it feels steady when driving this car on the mountain roads.
Every young people love this car causes that surface and body light is very power、active.
-->Young people love this car for its fashional exterior design and its powerful body light (what is body light?)
That oint like my personality sweet inside and tough outside.
-->The car reflects my personality: sweet...
I desire to own this car.
-->It is my dream to have a car like this.
I have two causes.
-->I have two main reasons for wanting this car.
At first, I low tide, I can drive it、open the video lurderly and open the windo catch air.
-->First, I love its fahsional look and I like the feeling of playing music loud and turning down the window to enjoy the air blowing in while driving it.
The second, I want to take my family to travel everywhere in Taiwan that is very important cause.
-->Second, it will be a ideal vehicle for me to take my family everywhere in Taiwan.
-->Color your topic sentence and make sure it clealy tell the reader what they will read in this paragraph. Check if all other supporting sentences are relevant to the topic sentence.
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