My sweet small room
My bedroom is very small that about six level ground. When you open the door, you can see the big french windows that can let my room become very bright and sunny. I have two desks, one is bigger on the french windows right and many books can put on it. The other one is small that is in fornt of the big desk and a set of computer on it. In the middle of the room has a dinning table when I and my friend eat chafing dish or delicious foods. I have a hard single bed abut against left wall . Accord before and after arrayal are the tunber dresser 、ice chest and TV. The door left has a one level around bed room.
posted by 莊佳燕 @ 4:17 AM
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Hello
Good job! Your room seems to be cozy and comfortable! You can improve by trying to make some expressions of location clear!
My bedroom is very small that about six level ground.
-->, about six ...
When you open the door, you can see the big french windows that can let my room become very bright and sunny. I have two desks, one is bigger on the french windows right and many books can put on it.
-->The bigger one is on the right side of the French window with many books on it.
The other one is small that is in fornt of the big desk and a set of computer on it.
-->...; it is in front of... It has a set of...
In the middle of the room has a dinning table when I and my friend eat chafing dish or delicious foods.
-->In the middle of the room is a...where...
I have a hard single bed abut against left wall .
-->...bed which abuts... the wall on the left.
Accord before and after arrayal are the tunber dresser 、ice chest and TV.
-->Accord before and after arrayal?? Can you rephrase this part to make it clear?
-->... a dresser, an ice chest and a TV.
The door left has a one level around bed room.
-->??
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